Good, but not funny ha ha that wasa good joke

It was more, Ha ha, ya I love kids in teh hall and stupid americans.
The girl in the bed doesn't resemble the the girl in question enough I find. Nore do the characters to her life story.
I believe this could be better.

Try this

Breaking all your lines into fill.

That drive scene was too choppy.
Your work could develope more. You have room to grow aswell.

Sweet sweet greens

It was short and sweet like teh green beer of the season.
It's excellent to see you can still make good episodes at 12 without them turning into a pile of animal feces.

Tuff stuff with your leg aswell. But Maybe they will give youa cyborg pelvis and you can turn it on and off, auto pilot and go to buisness on the local farmlands all day long till some fat cow comes home.

Damn good

The onyl thing that got to me more than the IM's was that the links within the IMS would over take the window itself and make you have to restart your WHOLE GAME! GEEZE!

If you guys really wanted to be incredable, you could have set the waiting level % to actually be real, not just static, not that it would have a real effect it would jsut be funny to see 348% after you get through like 50 thousands

GAH! AGAIN!, Never give up? Makes us a lahma for IMs!
But I want that Jazz Porn....bastards.

Very good work

A timer or notice clock of the speed of fire would be a cool addition. Also some peg clothes or something, so that the characters ad some atmosphere to the levels. Great work though.

Alright

you created it using left handed thinking alot