Score: 8

"Good, but not funny ha ha that wasa good joke"

submission: MssDynamitevsTerriSchiavo

date: March 29, 2005

It was more, Ha ha, ya I love kids in teh hall and stupid americans.
The girl in the bed doesn't resemble the the girl in question enough I find. Nore do the characters to her life story.
I believe this could be better.

Score: 5

"Try this"

submission: BugEye

date: March 14, 2005

Breaking all your lines into fill.

That drive scene was too choppy.
Your work could develope more. You have room to grow aswell.

Score: 9

"Sweet sweet greens"

submission: Retarded Animal Babies 12

date: March 14, 2005

It was short and sweet like teh green beer of the season.
It's excellent to see you can still make good episodes at 12 without them turning into a pile of animal feces.

Tuff stuff with your leg aswell. But Maybe they will give youa cyborg pelvis and you can turn it on and off, auto pilot and go to buisness on the local farmlands all day long till some fat cow comes home.